August 4, 2018
Our August meeting will be on August 4 in the Friends Room of the South Windsor Library. The business meeting will start at 10 a.m. and at 11 a.m. our speaker will be Carol Brennan a librarian from that library.
South Windsor Library
1550 Sullivan Ave.,
South Windsor, CT
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CORW MEETINGS for 2017
ATTENTION: NOVEMBER CHANGE
December 2nd Holiday Party-
At Adams Mill
165 Adams Street
11:30 AM to 1:30
After lunch, which will be individual checks. the meeting will be a discussion of the future of Charter Oak Romance Writers. If there are no volunteers for officers, building membership and other needed help, the board will recommend disbanding. Please bring your recommendations and suggestions.
As we talked about earlier on the loop, we’re redoing the meeting structure to allow people to come in later or spend the whole day with us, depending on commitments and interests.
CORW MEETING FORMAT for 2017
72 Maple Street, Bristol, CT 06010
9:30-10:30am Business Meeting
10:30-10:45am Member News (1 minute per member)
10:45-11am Getting ready/break/speaker setup
11:00-12:30pm – see above!
12:30-1:30am Potluck Lunch Social
1:30-1:45pm Member Corner
2-3pm Newbie Writing 101
After the speaker, time is allotted for a member’s corner/writing craft corner. We discussed what this could be last month, and the suggestions ran from picking one craft element for a roundtable discussion (such as conflict/dialogues, etc) or possible brainstorming with plot problems with each other’s work.
Or it’s possible to go off and write quietly on your own. YES, this is a new location!
There’s been some confusion about where it is but I can tell you it is just up the street on the same side as the Antique Clock and Watch Museum, a big white building at 100 Maple Avenue, Bristol, CT. You’ll see the *awning* that reads 72 Maple Street on a brick building. (Here’s the website of the museum, so you can see what it looks like: http://www.clockandwatchmuseum.org/visit
Here are the directions that the museum gives from I-84 (II-84 West (from Boston/Hartford): Take exit 38 and merge onto CT-6 West towards Bristol (go 8.9 mi). At the railroad tracks (just after Bristol Commons) turn left
onto Maple Street.)
Basically, if you can find CT-6, you can find Maple Street in Bristol and find our meeting place.
The road forks just after 72 Maple Avenue but you can turn into its parking lot before that. If anyone needs a ride, speak up, and we’ll sort that out!
Yes, it’s an apartment building. It belongs to Deb Davis, who is graciously letting us use the meeting space there in the basement for free and providing us with a permanent home, which we have lacked for a long time. There is a kitchen right there, hence the potluck lunch. We don’t have volunteers yet for the lunch. (There is also a gorgeous rooftop where we can hold meetings too…)
Nov. 4, postponed Speaker is Jim Chianese on Using Taro Cards to Plot
Jim is a certified Usui Shiki Ryoho Reiki Master/Teacher, Spiritual Alchemist, Certified Life Coach and Clinical Reflexologist. He is a member of the International Association of Reiki Professionals, Affiliate Member of the Reiki Membership Association, the International Alchemy Guild, and the Universal Coach Institute. He has earned a Bachelor of Science Degree in Workforce Education and Development from Southern Illinois University, a Master of Science Degree in Operations Management from the University of Arkansas, Diploma in Alchemy and Hermetic Philosophy from the International Alchemy Guild, a Certificate as a Usui Shiki Ryoh Reiki Master/Teacher from Sacred Garden Healing Oasis, a Certificate in Clinical Reflexology from the Central Connecticut School of Tai Chi, Chi Kung and Holistic Studies, and a Certificate in Life Coaching from the Universal Coach Institute.
Meeting October 21 2017
Speaker: 11:00 AM to 12:00 Noon
Multi-published Author Barbara Edwards covers several areas of critiquing including how to find a critique partner; forming a critique group; doing a constructive critique. Attendees are asked to bring five copies of a two page character introduction which will be used to practice what is learned.
Barbara writes paranormal romance, contemporary romance and historical romance. She founded CORW and The Kiss of Death chapter with friends. For several years she coordinated the critique partner section. She’s been a member of a critique group and also single partners.
Oct 21 – Speaker Trish Owens had a personal emergency and will be rescheduled.
CORW ANNUAL SUMMER PICNIC
LINDA COOK hosted the July 15 picnic,
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Finessing the First Page a Fabulous Event!!!
(From L to R: Jamie K. Schmidt, Rebecca Slitt, Sandra Marton, Dee Davis, Kathe Robin, Linda Ingmanson)
For those who attended, especially our distinguished panel, a huge & heartfelt THANK YOU!! For those who were unable to attend, you were missed! CORW will be putting on another event just like this next Fall, so stay tuned for details! Until then, some take-aways from our experts on First Page MUSTS:
‘The story starts when the bottle falls off the table’, instructed Chief Historical Reviewer for RTBookLovers as she pushed her water bottle closer and closer to the end of the table. ‘That is where the story begins’ (aka: the inciting Incident).
Other gems of the day for First Pages (Collectively attributed to entire panel):
The difference between a good writer and a great writer is mastering Point of View!!
First pages MUST hook the reader
First pages must show the main character and their actions (not thoughts, dreams, etc. And starting with the main character is important because that is who the reader will connect with first).
The first page asks a question that will be answered with the rest of the book. This is a promise to the reader. Keep it!
Push your idea outside of the ‘normal’ box – be different!
The first page must also show the (main) characters and the plot, or an element of the plot
In short, first pages answer or begin to answer most of these questions: who, what, where, when, and why.
Last but not least, make your submission copy error free! One miss-spelled word is probably acceptable, but more than one spelling or grammar error will kick your reader- aka an Editor or an Agent (gasp)!- out of your story and probably lose your chance to get them to want more from you.
Most of all, we were all encouraged to continue writing and perfecting our chosen craft!